I've been working on a writing piece for this, but I really don't like the voice I'm using for the Summoner. I'm going to try tweaking it some more, but if I can't figure it out by 6:00 PM EST tomorrow I'll post, and have you lovely people rip it apart.
Since Sidea does Summoner RP, I would really love your input, and fix up in particular. But everyone's welcome to join on the revision spree. I'm really cool with having other people tear everything up. And by that I mean throw everything out but one paragraph and rewrite from there if that's what it takes to fix it.
Current format: A series of drabbles (currently past tense. I prefer present for drabble formats, but I know present tense really annoys some people).
Summary: A jailbreak should happen in the full glare of the sun. It should be daring and involve killing the guards. Not an average night playing cat and mouse with a grinning monster with a dangerous sense of humor. A first meeting piece where the Summoner doesn't realize that this isn't any ordinary purple blood on his trail.
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Since Sidea does Summoner RP, I would really love your input, and fix up in particular. But everyone's welcome to join on the revision spree. I'm really cool with having other people tear everything up. And by that I mean throw everything out but one paragraph and rewrite from there if that's what it takes to fix it.
Current format: A series of drabbles (currently past tense. I prefer present for drabble formats, but I know present tense really annoys some people).
Summary: A jailbreak should happen in the full glare of the sun. It should be daring and involve killing the guards. Not an average night playing cat and mouse with a grinning monster with a dangerous sense of humor. A first meeting piece where the Summoner doesn't realize that this isn't any ordinary purple blood on his trail.