bad path for flash
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grandsummim just going to dump everything in one post for convenience sake.
and the revised script for the last two pictures should go like this:
"This can't go on. Others fall--they were your friends, and allies--and you let it happen. you taunt him about lost troops, he brings up the roll call of your. In the quiet and the dark neither of you ask why you suffer the decent to die and yourselves to live..." ==> soon you'll both march to judgment
"One more night. Then one of you will fall. You fight like its the last time and know that it very well may be. There will be no triumph. The games are done. You two have ended your plays, the theater is closed and the curtains drawn. You wonder if you win, when you win, whether he will wish you well despite it all. And the thought makes something like pain curl in your gut."
i tried to keep it mostly close to the original script but i just got stuck on the idea of the final battle. At the end of the day a kisnemistude is still a romance so i just thought about how despite being on different sides they still must care about each other. but they know that they each have responsibilities and neither can give up on their cause. so its kind of a tragic end no matter who wins.
also just an extra note. i tried to make it look like they are aging through the pictures so its like this takes place over the course of a few sweeps.
ok I'll shut up now, just tell me if there's anything you think i should change @_@
and the revised script for the last two pictures should go like this:
"This can't go on. Others fall--they were your friends, and allies--and you let it happen. you taunt him about lost troops, he brings up the roll call of your. In the quiet and the dark neither of you ask why you suffer the decent to die and yourselves to live..." ==> soon you'll both march to judgment
"One more night. Then one of you will fall. You fight like its the last time and know that it very well may be. There will be no triumph. The games are done. You two have ended your plays, the theater is closed and the curtains drawn. You wonder if you win, when you win, whether he will wish you well despite it all. And the thought makes something like pain curl in your gut."
i tried to keep it mostly close to the original script but i just got stuck on the idea of the final battle. At the end of the day a kisnemistude is still a romance so i just thought about how despite being on different sides they still must care about each other. but they know that they each have responsibilities and neither can give up on their cause. so its kind of a tragic end no matter who wins.
also just an extra note. i tried to make it look like they are aging through the pictures so its like this takes place over the course of a few sweeps.
ok I'll shut up now, just tell me if there's anything you think i should change @_@
